LIFE...
The sea always enchanted me…the unending wide sheet of blue water creased by the waves and life…fastened to the clouds at the other end…
The golden sand , the fuzzy foam stitched at the ends of the waves , and the ‘keep’ of the sea ..Sun..spending each night in it’s mighty embrace… I loved ‘em all…It was near the sea where I grew up…frolicked around…lived a LIFE
But now things have not been the same for the last three months. Many of our neighbors started to disappear suspiciously…most of them were last seen in the sea ppl say…but How can a sea as serene as this , engulf it’s own children ; that was my point…Our family moved to some other beach side locality as several others did…The ones who disappeared never returned to tell their tale…
I continued to play with the waves and smell the sand…..
Now I know where all those neighbors ended up , As I recollect these golden memories being caught in a net myself. I’ll also be served dead on a platter with spices in some oriental restaurant.
Life’s not too good being a crab , seriously.
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served by Garam Bheja Fry at 12:29 AM
14 Mirch lagi kya?? paani piyo yaha..
I din't leave any comments on your earlier posts coz i don't think am worthy enough to comment on your writing.
But i can't stop maself further. So, here goes my first official comment on your work.
The deception till the end and a dextreously crafted ending:
"being caught in a net myself. I’ll also be served dead on a platter with spices in some oriental restaurant".
Thatz ur real metier. Thatz something which keeps every reader glued till the end. you have a huge talent buddy. Juz try implementing it on a wider spectrum. Am sure u gonna make it big in this field. All the best.
did i tell you? you have a TALENT!! :)
bahut sahi bhai..... sacchi... TOO MUCHH!!!
last mein jo palti maaraa naa.... kasam se.... mazaaa aa gaya [:D]
# shashank
thanx mate you are alwayz welcome here...what's this "worthy" thingie?? bhaai mai vidyaathi aap bhi vidyaarthi...sab baraabar hai..aur jo yahaa comment karte hai wo koi booker awardees nahee hai..
# neers
yours words are golden neers!! they've always inspired me to come up with better pieces..thanx :))
# adarsh
kyaa bhai b'day ache se celebrate kiyaa naa?? aur thanx for the nice words..;D
B'day to mast celebrate hua... as in not GRAND types...jaisa (K)ekta maata dikhati hai naa.... waisa nahin....
normal style mein... doston k saath khaana peena.... thori hansi-mazaak... ek beautiful sa gift...tht's it. [:)]
# adarsh
sahee hai beta...'paayaara' sa gift kaheee kisi "pyaare" se person ne to nahee diyaa [:P]
For many, life's not good being a human either..
Probably you're trying to refer to something else as 'sea'...
# amod
yep !! different ppl can derive diff analogies with the story...like for us SW engnnrs
SEA :- the sea of happiness
NET :- the software industry
CRABS - we, the budding engineers...
Hey, same here, I too feel like a crab and another crab pulling me down, when I try to escape...I work as a Software engineer in the biggest SE company on the earth, life sux.
By the way, i tracked one of your reconnaissance mission at my blog. There was a fired gun shell was there...
# aashun
welcome here sire..!! yep you are the crab who's been caught in the largest net...life sucks everybody who r caught..
# gaurav
well actually it was referring to the software industry...newayz i'll complete your tag soon....mai aapke sir ki kasam khaata hoo...pakkka he he :)
Very nicely expressed. My wife's sister and her family live by the Juhu beach in Bombay and are always apprehensive during high tides. There is a saying,"Those who live by the sword ....." similar for sea?
hehehe, that was neat!
nice.. have always been a sucker for the sting in the tale :)
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